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United States • 19 y/o • Female
A wonderful piece of writing. To me, everyone is worth it, including yourself. Well done.
I really liked the first half of the writing. I can imagine the speaker on the street listening to music or tying the shoes.
Wowow the imagery was fantastic, I love how you described everything! =)
Another wonderful story. I loved it. Well done.
I really enjoyed your poem. Well done.
kinda gory but otherwise a good story! would have liked a backstory but....
I really loved this story too. Well done.
oh my god i absolutely loved this imagery(and your username)! it's very dark with a great twist, breaking all formatting rules. a-ma-zing.