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I liked this. Very brave of you to continue actually writing whilst experiencing rough turbulence... although I imagine it must have been quite therapeutic.
I just noticed one tiny detail.... did you really have a 'handle' on your mug of tea???

oh my god i absolutely loved this imagery(and your username)! it's very dark with a great twist, breaking all formatting rules.
a-ma-zing.

Hi
Quite the quirky read -- made me smile -- perhaps I wouldn't actually stab a two-timing creatin, but I would stab emotionally. Keep writing.

A lot of people will relate to this. Music can help us to release powerful emotions when nothing else does.

This is an impressive piece for such a young writer. I can believe in your narrator and the plea for reconcilliation is heartfelt.

Music. The one thing that soothes and destroys a soul that is a piece of art.
Finely done.

It was very good

i really liked this!! the imagery really hits me deep in my gut-- awesome job <33