This was a lovely read! I really enjoyed your descriptions and the twist with Giscard, and overall I think that this was well thought-out and well-written :)
You worded this so beautifully! Jerry's frustration LEAPS out of the text as well in her words and mannerisms.
This is so much raw emotion...shit, it was good. I feel torn apart now!
This story gave me the same "lost in time" reading feeling as I get while reading my favorite novels: it's truly addictive! Were this part of the back of a novel, I would 100% buy it. Keep writing, lovely!
This painted such a great picture of the room, and the emotions..wonderful to read!
This is such an interesting perspective, and I think you maneuvered it extremely well. My only suggestion is more variance of length in sentences, otherwise it was lovely!
This is softly heartbreaking, I loved it.
Man this was too true! Ah, you illustrated my inner writer and reader fighting so well!