This is so much raw emotion...shit, it was good. I feel torn apart now!
This story gave me the same "lost in time" reading feeling as I get while reading my favorite novels: it's truly addictive! Were this part of the back of a novel, I would 100% buy it. Keep writing, lovely!
This painted such a great picture of the room, and the emotions..wonderful to read!
This is such an interesting perspective, and I think you maneuvered it extremely well. My only suggestion is more variance of length in sentences, otherwise it was lovely!
This is softly heartbreaking, I loved it.
Man this was too true! Ah, you illustrated my inner writer and reader fighting so well!
I love how you insinuate of these twisting emotions and circumstances without necessarily pointing to each...wonderful.
This is so wonderful because it shows scars that aren't from others affecting you, but you affecting others. I loved this piece.