United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
this is good, but you might want to consider an editor! i can see a pattern of grammatical errors, and that's okay! writing takes a lot of work.
~ oddy
Agreed IanG.... she is definitely making suspense.... I like when u mentioned that he wasn't a human...
I started thinking about it and I think that he should I guess be a spirit of her mom who has changed her appearance but then...
Xoxo,
Sansid
The opening was really cool... it actually draw my attention. I love the story and there meeting and stuff. I feel that u should write in more description that will make it more interesting and it will definitely draws more attention.
It creates a scene in the reader's mind.
Yes, I agree with @IanG... punctuation was an issue and there were some spelling mistakes also.
Overall, I have to say, you are great, dude! Keep it up!
XOXO,
Sansid
I am so,so sorry
Hello hope you are fine. I wish to inform you that you have been nominated to feature in "THE WORLD WRITES AWARDS 2020"
Under the category 50 best Poem writers of the year.
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Entry fee is free. You will receive a free ebook once published and also a certicificate of Congratulations.
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Chief Editor
THE WORLD WRITES AWARDS
I love this..
