Danieloptera

Nice story. Get somebody to proof read things for you. There a few mistakes in there, but not important.

Thank you it all makes sence.

I can feel the pain. My brother was an alcoholic and somebody from work was an alcoholic.
I have watched their destruction. Both dead. Unfortunately my brother from a bullet and the other from alcohol poisoning. I am glad the letter helped. Now try to write something happy.

Is is good, but it is sad. I hope you have sorted yourself out.

Hope of the poor. Not something I would encourage people to do. Can happen, but the probability is low. Most people invest so much in this hope that if they saved it over the years they would have some money or perhaps not.

Interesting concept

I am a gardener so I see the fight for life in a garden. I like it. Migration perhaps, but I think migration itself is much more complex. I have been migrating all my life and the outcome very much depends on who you are. I would not tell people why you wrote it, let them decide what it is you wish to describe.

I can almost believe it.