Dari Poulson

Agreed it's not ok. Like adults always tell the little kids. If you can't say something nice say nothing at all

Nice. A little misleading, but isn't that a good thing? An enjoyable story, and definitely is relate-able.

Just Monika

Aww this is amazing

Really strong poem! I love it! Never let anyone hurt you

You are good !! keep doing that writing, the message is clear, understandable. Congratulations.

omg it so scary but so built up with tenison

I can relate to this. Maybe not directly, but from a different point of view. It's sad to see what I don't, to know the side I will never see. I can't imagine the pain it would bring. On another note, it expresses the sadness, the hurt, the pain, everything. It shows every second of the event, and it hurts. It really does. I feel so bad for a fictional character. It is well worded, I wasn't able to find mistakes easily, and its amazing. I hope you keep writing And as long as you do, I will keep reading.