Dari Poulson

Well. That was interesting.

I can relate to this. Maybe not directly, but from a different point of view. It's sad to see what I don't, to know the side I will never see. I can't imagine the pain it would bring. On another note, it expresses the sadness, the hurt, the pain, everything. It shows every second of the event, and it hurts. It really does. I feel so bad for a fictional character. It is well worded, I wasn't able to find mistakes easily, and its amazing. I hope you keep writing And as long as you do, I will keep reading.

Agreed it's not ok. Like adults always tell the little kids. If you can't say something nice say nothing at all

Good story! Just noticed though that you're missing the paragraph spaces between some of the paragraphs. I hope to read the next part soon!

Really strong poem! I love it! Never let anyone hurt you

You are good !! keep doing that writing, the message is clear, understandable. Congratulations.