Dari Poulson

I love this. Very good.

Beautiful. I love the emotion that was in this. I love that you showed the pain of his loss so well. Good job!

I was crying. At first I was a bit confused, but when I reread it I Understood. Good job.

This was really funny. The end is usally what happens to me with most of my stoires! XD
I love it!

I really liked this one and I vote that you continue it!

This is good. I wish I could write like this!

Whoa. Just whoa. The details are amazing. I felt like I was watching.

I like that Sarah talks to the spere like she knows it isn't just an object. Also, I love your cliffhanger. Your gonna kill me.