Reviews Given
Did you say that ur not the best at poems- Lyn don't make me laugh. this is better than all my poems combined. you dont mind if i steal it- JKK
made me laugh so much lol
OMG LYN THIS IS THE BEST- i have no words to correct it.
Omg, Ya NeED TO kEep WrIiTINGGG i need to know hwat happende dnext
This is really good. Honestly. Keep writing bro/sis!
Your best friend, shall be very happy. Keep Writinggg
It's just like...so..good..like...words...cant describe it. I've read Doom Befallen,, since Part 2, and man is it gooooooooooOOoOD. KEEP WRITITNG LYN, CAUSE THIS IS RLLY GOOOOOOOOOOOD
Miv, this is a really good short story, you've really put it into one nice masterpiece that really fits in really well. Your brilliant word choices, make this short story, really effective and really put a good effect on the reader. Just brilliant. Keep up the good work, and I'll be here to give you 5 stars!