United Kingdom • 15 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
You know when you leave it on a cliffhanger, everyone will want more. Good work, bruv
Your such a good writer! This is amazing. Just a tip for future writing. When writing one line of speech, and wanting to do a second one add more description around, so it's more of a narrative, and it'll be a future skill for writing. Other than that, great. Will there be part 4?
Of course, I won't mind. Got another prompt btw :)
can't wait for more!
Amazing! I'm glad you shared!
perfect
touching
dramatic...