Durandal

Wow. This is getting interesting.

That was good, I'm no good at horror stories.

Good job!

Stop playing with my emotions Misty! First I thought she was going to be kidnapped(the gray colorless buildings) Then she was going to get married, and then he was going to die. But no! She was about to get married and I was all excited. Then BLAM! He dies, the wedding was a daydream, and my heart was crushed.

I love this, and I want to know what happens. Please write 'The Lucky Dog' part 2. Unless there already is one and I just didn't notice.

Nice! It's a good story.

I think this was an amazing story, I really like it and hope you keep writing stories, no matter what other people tell you.

This is a good story. You did good. There were a few places where it could use a comma or a semicolon, but its still a great story.