United States • 21 y/o • MaleReviews Given
Good story! But you are missing some important details. For example: Does Gorigor ever have to eat? You never mention it.
Wow, nice job.
You did good! The ending felt a little rushed, but it was still a good story.
That's dark, but it's a true representation of some people's lives. Good job!
ruling a kingdom by fear is never a good idea, good job.
Good job!
Wow! That was a great story. I hope you're writing a sequel. If so, I can't wait!
I can't wait till the next part. Good job!