Durandal

United States • 21 y/o • Male

"I don't suffer from insanity, I enjoy every minute of it"-Edgar Allan Poe

Reviews Given

Wow, nice job.

21 Feb, 2020 0 Edit Delete

Good story! But you are missing some important details. For example: Does Gorigor ever have to eat? You never mention it.

10 Mar, 2020 0 Edit Delete

This is a good story. You did good. There were a few places where it could use a comma or a semicolon, but its still a great story.

12 Feb, 2020 0 Edit Delete

ruling a kingdom by fear is never a good idea, good job.

27 Feb, 2020 0 Edit Delete

That was intense.

5 Feb, 2020 0 Edit Delete

You did good! The ending felt a little rushed, but it was still a good story.

25 Feb, 2020 0 Edit Delete

That's dark, but it's a true representation of some people's lives. Good job!

24 Jan, 2020 0 Edit Delete

Wow! That was a great story. I hope you're writing a sequel. If so, I can't wait!

3 Mar, 2020 0 Edit Delete

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