United Kingdom • 19 y/oReviews Received
this is so sad-
i just- ii mean can you change the ending so its a bit happier-
This was a perfect story, I get everything, and the meaning of ‘She did it’, this was sad, but it was a good story too, keep up the writing! Have a nice day! 👋ðŸ½
I feel this poem, good work! This is sad too, and very true to most people, keep up the work!
The story is so beautiful! I wonder what happen to Snow 😯, Maybe she flew home, I get the story! And it’s sad, you did good on the writing, keep up the work! Have a nice day!
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This is really relatable.
There's no shame in being afraid or worried from time to time, but we musn't let it take over our lives. I'm s grown man and I worry at times. Only idiots never worry at all, but its possible to have bad times and come out the other side.
I hope this isn't your experience in real life. If so then don't go too far the other way as being too thin damages your health. If you went to a doctor they would have to keep anything you told them a secret. You won't be alone, a lot of people worry about their weight and appearence.
If its not your experience then hopefully it will make people think about an important issue. Either way you do right in putting this online.