Soul

This is rather cute. I never really gave thought if fairies existed or not though.... hmm may think about that for a while.

I liked this. Dark poems are my favorite but towards the end you could of add a little bit more so the last stanza would have a better impact on the readers.

I can relate to this greatly myself. I have a time in the year when I question myself and you put it into words. Though your writing does have a few punctual mistakes that needs to be fix. I hope to read more from you

-Fate🌸

This is grande piece but you do have errors. My advice to you is before posting you should reread it five times and if you are not sure then just ask someone if they can look over it for you to help you catch the mistakes because you are missing some words with other errors. Do not be discouraged. You story is good. Keep on writing.

Have a good evening,
Fate🌸

It is a true thing that happens. In which I also like how this was written. Keep on writing please.

Rather cute

Sigh, feelings so rightfully put out but you are young and have so much way to go. I am just going to say this, you can do a lot of things at your age. Love and dating, shouldn't be on your list right now. Go have fun. Do something incredible. It is a waste of time to date when you have your adult years to come. Right now should be about school and having the time of your life.

This one caught me right away. Hope you can continue with this story. There is so much potential for it.

Happy writing xx