Soul

This was beautiful but it is missing something to make it great.

A sad little short story. Rather cute in the beginning too.

This is rather cute. I never really gave thought if fairies existed or not though.... hmm may think about that for a while.

I can relate to this greatly myself. I have a time in the year when I question myself and you put it into words. Though your writing does have a few punctual mistakes that needs to be fix. I hope to read more from you

-Fate🌸

This piece has some minor mistakes and it seems a little force out but it is still good. One advice is try not to use the same word too much. Like "girl" was used. You want to avoid that. Still this was an interesting beginning and I look forward to read what else you got.

Have a good afternoon
Fate🌸

It would be.

Beautiful. This is relatable to a lot of people. Surely it is worth being one.

You play with your words quite well. It makes this piece lively and capturing to read. Personally, you did a very great job with it. I do hope to see more of your work in the future.