United States • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
I agree with what you say, but for how you connect the idea of a happy life and the idea of 'gender and sex' doesn't really fit together.
Glad you brought up the topic though :)
I'd say this is pretty good. Also amazed by how many areas of writing you delved into.
This is pretty good. Horror aspect was okay, but the story in all is pretty darn good. Little different from all the cheesy horrors. You may have brought folk lore horror into a new light.
Caught red handed. Like it.
Without imagination, we wouldn't have reality. But without reality, there would not be imagination.
Reality hits hard sometimes whether we accept it or not.
I like the simplicity to the idea and how it is tied in with the actual storyline of Momo.
Well done.
Funny I read this because I got a call from her 😨
I just so happen to come back to this story to see that people are making "leading-statements of belief" towards others and that saddens me. It seems that people just assume, based on the comment counts of positives and negatives, that people are judging others based on a belief/opinion even when they didn't express it.
So I deleted my first review on this poem that gave this 4 stars because we have opposite beliefs and now this is a new review and I give this writing all stars even when I have an opposite belief/opinion.
Thank you AaronTheRocker for writing something that may go against other's belief/opinion, because you are playing by the "rules" of human nature.