Ace

I go to the same school as Faith and she draws eyes soooo much! She is soooo good at drawing! One question: would it be okay if you made these stories a little longer please?

I feel like the mom was a little harsh at the beginning but the story is really nice!

I used to live in an orphanage, but then I found a really nice family. :)

I can totally relate.

For the "I maybe not be trendy but that's just me" part, I suggest(you don't have to) that you delete the 'be' at the end of 'maybe'".

this was good, maybe in the next part you could add a twist of some sort.