Ace

It's pretty good. You just have to continue to work on the poetry, but that can be fixed. Nice work!

I remember coming up with these! Lol!

I go to the same school as Faith and she draws eyes soooo much! She is soooo good at drawing! One question: would it be okay if you made these stories a little longer please?

This is good.

Nice story!

I feel like the mom was a little harsh at the beginning but the story is really nice!