Ace

Great poem! There are a couple of incomplete sentences, but this is a poem. So, I guess it doesn't really matter(I don't really know if it matters or not)?

Although this story is really good, I think if you just had the first one it would be better. This is just my opinion though.

nice poem

I agree with oxygen. Keep working on the poetry! ;p

Great job! I hope you write a second part!

I used to live in an orphanage, but then I found a really nice family. :)

For the "I maybe not be trendy but that's just me" part, I suggest(you don't have to) that you delete the 'be' at the end of 'maybe'".

I can totally relate.