Ace

Although this story is really good, I think if you just had the first one it would be better. This is just my opinion though.

I agree with oxygen. Keep working on the poetry! ;p

Great job! I hope you write a second part!

nice poem

I remember coming up with these! Lol!

I go to the same school as Faith and she draws eyes soooo much! She is soooo good at drawing! One question: would it be okay if you made these stories a little longer please?

I feel like the mom was a little harsh at the beginning but the story is really nice!

I used to live in an orphanage, but then I found a really nice family. :)