Ace

This is truly an amazing story! I will definitely recommend it to my friends.

I suggest that you add a few line breaks so that the reader can have a collective moment, but otherwise, it is really good! I truly hope you feel much better!

This is an amazing story! I am sure that you will inspire many young dancers.

Please write a part three!

Doesn't bao bao also mean bun in Chinese? Anyhow, great story. I know this must be hard for you to write about. Just a couple of years ago I lost my Grandpa. Although I did not know him as well as I would have liked, I still feel like a big part of me has disintegrated.

This is such an amazing story! You have inspired me to write a story about my mom as well.

This is such an amazing poem! I hope you continue to write more! ;)

Friends are always there for you, no matter what! ;)