United States • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I really enjoyed that. Well done.
This is beautifully written. The emotions are really raw, and I love how you expressed them. I want you to know that you are not alone. There are people who are going through this same feeling, and also people who care about you and want to help you. Keep your chin up <3
Thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Like sunsets, we, ourselves, are ever changing. An uplifting reminder we are different people at different times in our lives. Well done.
I was on the verge of tears reading this. I love how it's arranged! Can't wait for more!
Woah. This is amazing. “Once your mask comes down…â€
I can really feel your pain and emotions in this. It reminds me of the poem I wrote, I’m That Girl. When you become everyone else’s shoulder to cry on, person to always be there, and everything else… it becomes hard to ask someone to be there for you. And then it just becomes easier to put on a mask of a smile and not let anyone know what you’re truly thinking.
Sorry for my long review, but this musing was amazing and raw and beautiful.
Ah, I like the valiant knight coming in. Sounds like a real badass to me.
If you have characterized the "poisonous" voices as wild beastly creatures, or pillagers- something of foul nature in time with knights and chivalry, I'd think that fit in very well, especially since the breaking point saying "SHUT UP" seemed to be like a damsel-in-distress moment. But considering that it's a poem of thoughts in a general sense, it still works fine.
I know I've been talking a lot about 8th-16th century time-style and I'm sorry for that. I just got up in that thought process after seeing the valiant knight.