United States • 21 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
If this is autobiographical, remember we are all a mix of strengths and weaknesses, faults and virtues. If things are hard now they may not always be. Other people may have issues they won't admit to. If their lives are perfect now they may have issues in the future. If you've made mistakes there's time to learn from them.
I love this! It's so sweet!!
This is really relatable and well written. You're right, nobody is perfect, and that's okay, our flaws are what make us relatable.
that's right. you don't have to be perfect. just be real.
love you girlie :) great job with this one
100% understand where you're coming from with this one. i can really feel the emotion in it. you're good at more things than you realize <3
lovely imagery and a shining message. good job :)
Ah, I like the valiant knight coming in. Sounds like a real badass to me.
If you have characterized the "poisonous" voices as wild beastly creatures, or pillagers- something of foul nature in time with knights and chivalry, I'd think that fit in very well, especially since the breaking point saying "SHUT UP" seemed to be like a damsel-in-distress moment. But considering that it's a poem of thoughts in a general sense, it still works fine.
I know I've been talking a lot about 8th-16th century time-style and I'm sorry for that. I just got up in that thought process after seeing the valiant knight.
Woah. This is amazing. “Once your mask comes down…â€
I can really feel your pain and emotions in this. It reminds me of the poem I wrote, I’m That Girl. When you become everyone else’s shoulder to cry on, person to always be there, and everything else… it becomes hard to ask someone to be there for you. And then it just becomes easier to put on a mask of a smile and not let anyone know what you’re truly thinking.
Sorry for my long review, but this musing was amazing and raw and beautiful.