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You describe the scene and the change of mood very well.

I hope things improve for both of you, and soon. It must've taken courage to share this.

Nice twist at the end.

You wrote 'lung' when I think you meant 'lungs' plural but this is still a vivid, hard hitting piece. Well done.

This is a plausible, evocative story. Thanks for sharing it.

I hope things get better for you and soon. I'm not an expert on medical matters, but I know that medicene has advanced greatly over time, and illnesses that were once incurable are now treatable. Don't give up hope.

That was very thoughtful Skie.

I found this piece very moving, well done.