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'As the would was being nice' should read 'as the world was being nice.'
'I got unconscious' should read 'I fell unconscious.'

Even so, you wrote some good descriptions. I like the line about dancing dolphins. Keep it up and you'll get past mistakes like those above.

This is a good start for a young writer. If you want to improve it, explain why the princess is always so sad. Perhaps her father offended the same witch who turned the prince into a bear and so she's under a curse too. If not, perhaps someone she cared about died young for some reason.

I'm not big on the technical aspects of poetry, but the feelings behind this are plausible and heartfelt. I'm sorry for your loss.

You evoke a sense of place very well. Your protagonist's self-criticism is plausible, as are her hopes for her daughter.

A well written piece with a touch of mystery about the heroine.

I like the metephores of the heron and the airport terminal.

You do a good job of evoking the forest and the cycle of decay and renewal.

I like the term 'brutally hard.' You bring two very different worlds up against each other and the contrast works well.

Just one thing, you refer to the floor and it seems to be outdoors. We usually say 'ground' for the natural earth beneath our feet and 'floor' for a man-made covering. That said, people sometimes refer to the 'forest floor' and the rest of your descriptions are good.