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I'm glad they took in the cat, they did right there.

You're entitled to say we still don't have an ideal world without being stigmatised for it.

A well written and only too plausible story. We all need support from time to time but we don't always get it.

This is a moving and thoughtful piece, I enjoyed it. It didn't need to be scary.

Coming from a country where the weather is notoriously fickle, I can relate to this. Well done.

This is difficult subject matter but you handle it with courage and honesty. If you want to write another chapter, yes do it.

A lot of people will relate to this. Music can help us to release powerful emotions when nothing else does.

You are right in saying that problems don't end when the war is won. A lot of fantasy stories are based on that assumption, but it seldom works like that in real life.

Eden goes from being overpowered to killing everyone rather quickly. If he's trying to fight his way to your narrator but it takes him time to reach her, that's more consistent.