Hong Kong • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
This is literally the cycle of life. Fake friends, fake boyfriend, fake tears, betrayals, lies, tears... This poem is so so good and it reflects and gives a voice to all of those people who don't have one... I love it so so much! :)
What is does it mean to be a dying star? Beautifully written, amazingly organized, more of a mental conflict than an actual conflict. Well done! :)
Wait, what?! Please continue, I would like to see where this goes! :)
A story so great that I got me to run to my BFF and hugged her with all my might. Keep going! :)
Oh no... I'm so sorry. I wouldn't wish this upon my worst enemy from the universe and back. But how you've expressed your feelings and your thoughts are absolutely beautiful in the most wicked way possible. Hope you feel better. Hope these five stars and a virtual hug would make you feel ok because that is literally all you can do with all hell broken loose and we are two continents apart... so yea. :)
Yo. This is literally so good I cannot. All of the things you describe in the poem is so aesthetically pleasing, but it also proves your point. Love this to the blood moon and back!
This hits hard... It's so amazing that it actually hurts to read this. Betrayal is no uncommon thing, but this gives anyone a taste of just how bad it is when you lose trust in someone you loved and trusted so much. Love this so so much!
Gentle reminder: Be careful when you rhyme, sometimes it IS really hard to find a rhyming word that makes sense and doesn't upset the grammar of English. Otherwise great job!