Jan Brooks

This is really good! I would love to see what happened that caused her to become this hopeless. Your writing is easy to read and paints the scene quite well, good job!

This was awesome! I love the mystery around the old man. A couple mistakes, but those can easily be overlooked so no biggy.

I really enjoyed this story! I love how you said the world of snow outside was her friend, that made me smile. I also liked how the cat's name was Leo. It's a name I have a guilty pleasure of seeing. Thanks for posting this!

It’s the truth. Our bodies keep us upright, and yet we look in the mirror and see nothing but mistakes. I’ll tell you what: God doesn’t make mistakes, and he made that body you see in the mirror. You’re absolutely right, perhaps treating it with care will help you see all the good it does for you. Thank you for sharing this!

Beautiful. Words can't describe the emotions that washed over me when I read this. Incredible work!

this was so beautiful, i love it

Nice story. Get somebody to proof read things for you. There a few mistakes in there, but not important.

Your descriptions are good but you could add a little more tension. If the kitten tries to run and Amy looses sight of it she could go home, get a piece of fish or chicken and lay it down where the animal was. Then after an anxious wait it could return, drawn by the scent of food and this time let Amy take it. A little more difficulty would make a more interesting story.
Its a good choice of subject.
I've got a cat story on page 11 of this site, 'Misty's Cry,' and there are more besides.