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wow. this is like looking at my life story, sort of. good job.
thats so sad. im here for you
that was really good. i liked how you worded it; it really made me cry :(
Could you say the previous killings happened in a different town but the same county? That way its more plausible that Victoria would go jogging alone. Also, if you add that her cat came from a rescue centre that indicates that she's kind and so gives us a reason to root for her. It makes her a little more active.
I wrote a story on a similar theme and put it on this site. Its on page 9 now. Perhaps reading someone else's take on it would help.
Wow! That's amazing. Gave me chills and smiles! Great job
It is great and i really loved it....keep going
