Justice_Dolly

Little quick but it is any interesting tale so far. I hope you will continue you this soon.

continue this please! Cliffhangers drive me crazy.

Great story! Love the suspense!

Intriguing, leaves the reader wanting more. Keep writing!

You are a really good writer!! You know how to leave people at the edge of their seats.

i really love this you should right more

Amazing, you should continue this

Very good! I especially liked the author's note. A very similar experience happened to me when I was about 7. Keep up the good work!