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Interesting storyline, except you are missing a lot of commas, and your punctuation, grammar, and vocabulary are kind of sad... maybe edit?
So relatable, this hurts! I really appreciate your style.
I wish I could express myself as clearly as you can.
Moving.
yes.... yes! YES!
Intriguing...
Beautiful! Five star, but maybe go through and edit the spelling?
Just the few slip-ups I noticed :)
comeing- coming, relization- realization, delicat- delicate, and last, personally I'm not even sure about this one so my bad if I'm wrong, but is it made-up instead of makeuped?
Vivid... I love your writing style!