Reviews Given
This sounds great! I love the way the words roll off the reader's tongue like they were meant to be there. The imagery is amazing and I can't wait to hear more from you.
Write more oh my gosh holy cow m. I've heard something like it but oh my gosh
There were a few grammar mistakes, like "seen" instead of "see," and you forgot to end the part where the narrator speaks with the ", but besides that is was beautiful and amazing. I hope you write more
Wow that's embarrassing! I've forgotten to wear Underwear once but that's horrible. New source of nightmares XD!
There were a few grammar errors but the way you wrote the piece of text made it emotional and created connections for the reader. Be strong!
Wow!! It sounds great! I knew it was a father or stepfather at about the third paragraph, but that's just because I have read things like this. There are a few grammar errors, but besides that it's great!
I suffer greatly from anxiety, and hearing it explained in words got me thinking. I did feel anxiety while reading this, and it also comforted me that other people can have the same symptoms. I believe that this is a story, wether people are relating to genres when they are saying it's not or whatever.
Any who, I think it was great.
I think this symbolizes life and love perfectly. I admire the symbolism you used with the forest - very great job.