Kat

That made my heart glow in a weird way. I know people like this and they SUCK. Anyway, thanks!!!! Loved it!!!

That was great! I loved it! I know that I sound crazy, since it was gruesome and a little horrifying, but I think it was amazing!

Holy crud. That was hallarious and just downright awkward at the same time. Love it.

Oh my gosh write more!!!! How could you end it like that??! You're killing me!! 😜
I loved it! A few grammatical errors, but it sounds amazing!! Please write more!!

Wow that's embarrassing! I've forgotten to wear Underwear once but that's horrible. New source of nightmares XD!

Wow!!! That is a great plot line!! One problem though. There are a bunch of grammatical gaps or errors and some punctual mistakes.
I also wanted to ask, where are the moments when the girl's friend couldn't speak, had to step back, and come at it a moment later?
Could she be fingering the gun while she talked? That way the audience (readers) would know that something was in her pocket but didn't know what exactly it was. Something like explaining the hard, cold metal would've sufficed.
Great job on the plot line and I am excited to read more of your work!

OH MY GOSH I FEEL THAT WAY!! That's hallarious! I love the way that you made the reader feel bad for the character, and then all the sudden feels stupid for believing it. I love the way that you put that.
There was one grammatical error I found, in the first few paragraphs. You used the wrong 'there.' It was 'their' but supposed to be 'there.'
Great job! Can't wait to read more!!
-KP

Holy cow that was a lot of crazy! Mind blown! XD