Kat

I feel like this every time I get committed to a story (at least twice a day 😜). Sometimes it get so frustrating you want to scream (and sometimes you do). Very well written. I love it!

Very feeling. I could definitely sense the pain of the narrator. It broke my heart to hear all that - I guess those who have experiance have a hard time forgetting.

Hang in there!!!

Yes yes yes!!! That was great! The detail, the senery!! I could FEEL it! Oh my gosh yes. Thank you. Please continue. I loved it. I just can't. Oh my gosh. Thank you.

I totally get it. Thanks for the poem, made me feel a little less alone. Hang in there!

I love the meaning to this entry! It really makes people think about how they act, and why they act.
I loved it and am yet to find anything that might need worked on.
I can't wait to hear more from you (on this story or another)!

I know how that feels. 🤧
Great job on the (can't think of the word) -the way you used objects to describe non-existent figures-.

Wow! Really discriptive! Makes me want to write something like that. I think I will stick to short romance stories though 😜. Seems to be what I'm good at.
Keep writing! -KP

Now that's what you I'm talking about! I felt that you had true meaning and feeling behind this, some past experience that made you feel deep down that you didn't wish this upon anyone.
The rhyming was more decent, but the meaning is more.
Keep writing! -KP