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I like it, but use more descriptive words to make it more interesting, but other than that it really good.
short, but still very good.
I like it, very deep, and real.
Wow, that deep!
So there are a few grammar and spelling errors, but the story is very good, and it carries a very important message.
Tip: copy and paste your story into google docs or word, and use there spell check, and grammar check programs to fix the spelling and grammar problems. Then once its all fixed just copy and paste it back on to
wow! just WOW!
so freaking true.
I like it, your characters are very detailed, is this fiction or your real life?