United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
This story needs some work but it's pretty good for the most part.
wouldn't you die if you jumped off a balcony?
The plot is nice, but the wording and flow of the story needs some work.
you lost me a little and the story was a little tense, try to be more unique, still, it was cool.
I never saw a scar on yout cheek at school though...
Great job! I hope you write a second part!
