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Isnt that what normally does tear it apart?, I dont aim to piss you off but theres more than one type of person.

aye i'm not small, it's the word that's short...

Sounded great.

Its good that you're self-critical, if you want to be a writer that's a hopeful sign. I think you improved as the piece went on.

Man this was too true! Ah, you illustrated my inner writer and reader fighting so well!