United States • 19 y/oReviews Received
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this is fantastic, and i cant wait to read part 2. on my way now!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH you made me cry.
I love it. I love it so much
Great addition, although there were many minor spelling errors that you may want to check but other than that, it was amazing, sad to see that there might only be one part left unless taylor cheats death, keep up the good work my friend
It's amazing this story rise your spirit and make you to set a goal and work on it till the end... amazing
This sounds like a beautiful song, even if that’s not its intended purpose. Would you mind if I sang this and give you credits?
i think this is an amazing way of showing whats happening in the world right now. WELL DONE
Aww, this was so sweet. The aesthetic is just so cute! Also, thank you so much for the shout out!
"I can't-I can't breathe!" screeched Anna. "OH MY GOD OH MY GOD HELP I DIDN'T CONSENT TO THIS-" Katya yelled. I giggled like a total psychopath as the wind rushed back to me, lifting my hair. I swung my legs as we arrived at the bottom and shot up again.
Up, down, up, down. I laughed some more as Katya and Anna held on to their seats for dear life.
The ride slowed down, slowly resting near the ground. With a loud clunk, the seats slowly touched the ground.
"I...I hate-ha...hate you," Katya panted. I cringed as her voice cracked. "Guess who doesn't have any vocal cords anymore." I laughed despite my friend’s disheveled composure.
Me, forcing my friends to do things they don't want to do!