United States • 19 y/oReviews Received
So well written. Could never tell you rushed it, loved it!
This is really good and really powerful. The ability to reflect on yourself and your past is actually really hard to do. I especially like this sentence: "I saw you, bit by bit, the defeat slumping your shoulders, tainting your soul." The distance you've identified between you and your experiences and the old you all in one swirl mixed with your self-awareness is incredible. Super interesting stuff and written in an impactful way.
Man this was too true! Ah, you illustrated my inner writer and reader fighting so well!
Its good that you're self-critical, if you want to be a writer that's a hopeful sign. I think you improved as the piece went on.
thanks a million
Sounded great.
