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Nice...but maybe you can describe how love can be good too? Besides that, I think it's a nice story. Can't wait to read the next one!

Hi! Nice poem! Musing means it's reflection or thought of something.

This poem really shows the two side of things. The good and bad part. Great and keep writing!

I'm so sorry. Nicely written.

continue this please! Cliffhangers drive me crazy.

I need to say this to every new person I meet... Keep up the great work!

pretty short, but hits the same.