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Dang. Short, yet deep. And yes, I do understand the meaning. People sometimes only sees the surface of this poem, but I can see all the way to the bottom. The setting, (Catalina?), the pills (not gonna spill ;P), the friendship.

Anyway, great poem! Keep up the good work!

Aw, this is so sweet. It's slightly weird, but it's so true! Beautifully written in few words. Keep it up!

Please don't hurt yourself again! And remember, we are always here for you. And I know what you mean my mental trauma. (hahahaha. Experience! Yay me!) Keep up the nice work!

Holy. Crap.

Intriguing. A sequel would be real cool.

Yikes.
Creeped me out. Good job!
As mentioned before, this story needs some revision. Some periods are missing, and some sentences have grammar mistakes such as "'We closed now,'". I didn't know if that intentional if the creepy dude spoke weirdly, or a sloppy mistake.
Anyway, besides that, you did an amazing job! Can' wait for more.

Love this! You should see that thing I wrote about the soldier who went to Korea, then returned to the US and the government took everything away from him. Now he's homeless.True story. :/
Anyway, great poem!

it's very simple, but hold such a deep meaning! Keep it up!