United States • 19 y/oReviews Given
Wow.
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I have no other words. XD
Love this! You should see that thing I wrote about the soldier who went to Korea, then returned to the US and the government took everything away from him. Now he's homeless.True story. :/
Anyway, great poem!
I would be scared out of my mind. When I was in 1st grade, we heard a gun sound by the school and I was terrified. Beautifully written and keep it up!
Very good!! But I think if you add a bit more detail, it would be better...