Great story. Interesting, suspenseful and thought-provoking.
Brilliantly observed, and well-written. Bravo!
What a tragic story & very well written, Well done
Very well written piece
Very sad story...
How about writing an alternative (hopeful) ending? I'd love to read it if you do.....
I like your message. Carry on being strong!
Really enjoyed it..... Let's just watch this space hey?
Brilliant. I love it.