I really enjoyed reading this. The very unexpected ending was brilliant!
I liked this. Very brave of you to continue actually writing whilst experiencing rough turbulence... although I imagine it must have been quite therapeutic.
I just noticed one tiny detail.... did you really have a 'handle' on your mug of tea???
Well said Gerry.
& hopefully your Gov't will stop using so many fossil fuels before next year.... Fingers crossed for you
Are you going to carry on with your story?
Very well written.
Are you going to go further with the story?
An honestly-written heart-felt account. Thank you for sharing.
Great - Very vivid imagery!
Great! I loved the suspense!
I think a word other than 'goo' would have been better though for the human remains.
(Also, a couple of spelling mistakes like 'whale' instead of 'wail' - hope that's not being pernickety.....)