France • 62 y/oReviews Given
very scary situation! Thank you for sharing
What a brilliant start! But then I got very confused in the fourth section... I think with a little work here, it has the potential to be a great piece of work.
I look forward to reading more.....
Excellent! Made me laugh
Hilarious
I'm not normally a poetry lover, but I do like this one very much.
I just have one question: is there a reason you used the word 'shined' instead of 'shone'?
Yes, spooky describes this to a 'T'
Am intrigued..... Great start.
Are there any more instalments? I hope so
Fantastic story.....