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Looking forward to reading more.....

very scary situation! Thank you for sharing

Great story. I especially liked the last line.

So very sad!
You really drew me into your 'hurt'
I wish you all the best for the future...

I really liked the interesting twist of the ending....

Well done Paul, I like the way you built up your characters

Really enjoyed it..... Let's just watch this space hey?

This is so sad, so heart-felt.....
Well done!