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Very sad story...
How about writing an alternative (hopeful) ending? I'd love to read it if you do.....

What a beautiful story

Well said

That is so sad Ivy. I hope writing it was therapeutic for you.

So is his name Mark or Paul?
Otherwise I quite liked it

terrible!!!! and yes, I agree - you must tell....

I'm just wondering why you classed this as 'religious'?
Anyway, so far so good, I look forward to reading more