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I'm just wondering why you classed this as 'religious'?
Anyway, so far so good, I look forward to reading more
That is so sad Ivy. I hope writing it was therapeutic for you.
very poignant, well done !
What a beautiful story
I'm not normally a poetry lover, but I do like this one very much.
I just have one question: is there a reason you used the word 'shined' instead of 'shone'?
Hilarious
very scary situation! Thank you for sharing
how tragic !
Very well done
A few grammatical errors, but the idea is brilliant