Reviews Given by Lussac on Short Stories 101

terrible!!!! and yes, I agree - you must tell....

11 Dec, 2019 0 Edit Delete

So is his name Mark or Paul?
Otherwise I quite liked it

11 Dec, 2019 0 Edit Delete

I quite liked this - up to the final paragraph about the new family, which I think spoiled the story. I think it would be much better with a different ending... or even (in my opinion) just to use the last sentence after Robin's death & end the story there

11 Dec, 2019 0 Edit Delete

Dear Big Brother.... by sheafreeland

very poignant, well done !

28 Nov, 2019 0 Edit Delete

The Herd by SianD

I liked this story.

21 Dec, 2019 0 Edit Delete

They Called Me Amazing Grace by Matt Decker

I'm not normally a poetry lover, but I do like this one very much.
I just have one question: is there a reason you used the word 'shined' instead of 'shone'?

3 Dec, 2019 0 Edit Delete

Did the Darkness Start in Me? by Mitzi Danielson-Kaslik

I don't usually appreciate poetical prose, but I do really like this. I think you have talent, continue writing.....

29 Nov, 2019 0 Edit Delete

The Huffy and the Whatchamacallit by Ricky Taylor

I enjoyed your story. Thank you for sharing your memory with us all.

21 Dec, 2019 0 Edit Delete

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