France • 62 y/oReviews Given
I'm not normally a poetry lover, but I do like this one very much.
I just have one question: is there a reason you used the word 'shined' instead of 'shone'?
Hilarious
Excellent! Made me laugh
What a brilliant start! But then I got very confused in the fourth section... I think with a little work here, it has the potential to be a great piece of work.
I look forward to reading more.....
very scary situation! Thank you for sharing
how tragic !
Very well done
A few grammatical errors, but the idea is brilliant
WOW - if this is true, I really feel for you. The writing is very powerful. The person you write about is not in the least 'selfish' at all but a very brave and beautiful person.
I wish you all the best
intriguing
I hope to read more