𝕝𝕪𝕟𝕘𝕓𝕒𝕜𝕣𝟠𝟚

this rhyming! it spoke right to my heart. keep at it! i can't wait to see what you write next

yessss. i love the vibes of this piece and the little snippets of imagery you get from each line. it reads like a photo montage. great job!

I love this! Your writing style is beautiful, and the twist at the end is so sad but it brings the whole story together. Great job :)

short but well written. you have a talent for getting across what you mean with just a few words. great twist at the end :D

yessss. well done :D

The rhyming of this is beautiful! Great job :D

So relatable! :)
Trying to find the balance between day-to-day responsibilities and your own well-being is a challenge, and it doesn’t help when you start to lose interest in the things you enjoy and your brain is being unkind. I hope you find the motivation to push through it and find joy in the little things, even if your life isn’t how you imagined. Proud of you for making it this far

Amen sister! Well said <3