Canada • 23 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Love when we write together <3
Beautiful
I know how that feels. 🤧
Great job on the (can't think of the word) -the way you used objects to describe non-existent figures-.
Nice little piece only spoilt by a scattered number of typos and grammatical errors.
While the subject matter is important, MaKaylee, this is not a story.
There are other platforms more suited for your writing if you want to post excerpts and vignettes. Disregarding the posting Guidelines is bad form.
A pretty interesting prose poem, even though it's been done to death a thousand times before. Be mindful of the difference between "then" and "than".
I wish you had unpacked this prose poem more. Describe the emotions of being lost in these woods. Juxtapose it with the guy's life outside.
Be bold.
And be mindful of your spelling and grammar.
I love this beautiful short story because there's not many like it. Overall, good job, but it had a few mistakes such as:
'Just than, I woke up.'
Instead it should've been;
"Just then, I woke up."
Just be sure to check it through before submitting, but nice job!