melissak

Sir Ayren seems like one of those people I read in mangas who are crooks. I'm not sure if he just seems that way or if he's actually a crook. I'm very interested in the boy with green eyes. I can already imagine the boy without a description. Also, did you mean: "a white woman with sleeves" instead of "a with woman with sleeves"

I like it! You like writing these according to your other submissions, and I honestly enjoy reading them. There sometimes sad, but inspirational too.

I like it

I like it, but dang you said time a lot. I can't even count the times you said time.

love it, but also so sad ;-;

I'm intrigued to know more

Agreed it's not ok. Like adults always tell the little kids. If you can't say something nice say nothing at all

OH!!! whos Roy? ;) ;)