Amber Jones

I feel like you can't really understand because you haven't done or experienced any of those things, but as far as the literature goes, I think it's pretty good.

It was definitely a very unique and interesting take on Time travel, especially the discovery of it. I can appreciate the originality of the work. Good job!

Good story! Just noticed though that you're missing the paragraph spaces between some of the paragraphs. I hope to read the next part soon!

I think I have to agree with this. It can be hard, this is so true.

Wow. This was a very evocative story, good job!

There are so many different voices in our lives, constantly telling us to do something, pushing our decision in a certain direction. So there is a lot of pressure behind making a choice...Good job.

Pretty good...

Could be edited, but still. Wow. That was good.