United States • 22 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
I really want to see part two!
Overall a good introduction. You could've described the dogs in a little more detail: are they any particular breed? What kind of weapons does she see? Not everyone will have seen the Hunger Games, but I get the drift of your piece.
Op. Sounds like he had a good meal. I liked it. Very... dog. Dog. Anyways, I really like it! Write more if you wanna!
Brilliant!
Excellent!
This was an amazing story, can't wait to read the next chapter!
