United States • 22 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
i think you have a good start here. but it needs more. it lacks emotion and it needs more description. the idea is great and with a bit of work this will could be great. :)
This was a great story.
Your stories are amazing!
This was an amazing story, can't wait to read the next chapter!
Excellent!
Brilliant!
Op. Sounds like he had a good meal. I liked it. Very... dog. Dog. Anyways, I really like it! Write more if you wanna!
Overall a good introduction. You could've described the dogs in a little more detail: are they any particular breed? What kind of weapons does she see? Not everyone will have seen the Hunger Games, but I get the drift of your piece.